In this passage, “Is Music a Good Tool for Healing?” the writer,
Elizabeth Scott, is discussing how a health care tool called music therapy is
used to heal people and ease their pains. Research shows that hospitals now use
music to help patients with pain management, depression, to promote movement,
calm patients, ease muscle tension and other benefits, which in other words, is
known as music therapy. For instance, studies show that music with a strong
beat can help make brainwaves more active to synchronize with the beat. The
faster the beat is, the sharper your concentration is which allows you to think
more alert. A slower beat can result in a much calmer, meditative state of
mind. Like Scott, I also believe that “This is not surprising, as music affects
the body and mind in many powerful ways.”
The writer explains how breathing and heart rate may be
influenced by the changes music can bring, possibly meaning slower breathing,
heart rate, and an activation of the relaxation response amongst other things.
The writer also states that this is why music and music therapy can help
prevent the harsh effects of chronic stress, thereby aiding not only
relaxation, but also health. To calm down my attitude and take stress away I listen
to mellow music. This type of music helps me keep a positive mindset with a
smile upon my face, making my day much easier and joyful.
Healing patients with music is an immense significance. I feel
it is because I find this idea to be slightly true. While my mom was in a coma,
the doctors played soothing music just above her head to help the pressure in
her brain calm down and promote movement. It showed that since they started
playing soft music she was more relaxed and fought to show little movement.
Another example of mine is when I was in physical therapy for my
knees. My therapist played music to help motivate me to move more during the
exercises we did. When we would do slow exercises with little movement to relax
my muscles, she would play soft music. When it was time to enhance the
exercise, she’d play a more up-beat song. Also, the music would not only relax
my body, it would relax my mind as well.
This shows that music can be used to bring a more positive state
of mind, to help keep depression and anxiety under control. It is very
affective towards the body and mind in various ways. It is also a good used
tool to help people.
Candice, the first two paragraphs function in the same way, summarizing the text. Developing more your body paragraphs and combining the first two into one would make this a passing essay
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